[Ffmpeg-cvslog] CVS: ffmpeg/doc ffserver-doc.texi,1.5,1.6

[Diego Biurrun CVS]

Update of /cvsroot/ffmpeg/ffmpeg/doc
In directory mail:/var2/tmp/cvs-serv24434

Modified Files:
	ffserver-doc.texi 
Log Message:
Further spelling/grammar/wording fixes as suggested by the Wanderer and Mans


Index: ffserver-doc.texi
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RCS file: /cvsroot/ffmpeg/ffmpeg/doc/ffserver-doc.texi,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- ffserver-doc.texi	9 Jun 2005 21:14:15 -0000	1.5
+++ ffserver-doc.texi	9 Jun 2005 22:29:18 -0000	1.6
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 you run the ffserver ./configure, make sure that you have the --enable-mp3lame
 flag turned on.
 
-LAME is important as it allows streaming audio to Windows Media Player.
+LAME is important as it allows for streaming audio to Windows Media Player.
 Don't ask why the other audio types do not work.
 
 As a simple test, just run the following two command lines (assuming that you
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
 Maybe you didn't install LAME, or got your ./configure statement wrong. Check
 the ffmpeg output to see if a line referring to MP3 is present. If not, then
 your configuration was incorrect. If it is, then maybe your wiring is not
-setup correctly. Maybe the sound card is not getting data from the right 
+set up correctly. Maybe the sound card is not getting data from the right 
 input source. Maybe you have a really awful audio interface (like I do)
 that only captures in stereo and also requires that one channel be flipped. 
 If you are one of these people, then export 'AUDIO_FLIP_LEFT=1' before 
@@ -107,16 +107,16 @@
 
 Yes, it does. Any thoughts on this would be gratefully received. These
 differences extend to embedding WMP into a web page. [There are two
-different object IDs that you can use, one of them -- the old one -- cannot
+different object IDs that you can use, the old one cannot
 play very well, and the new one works well (both on the same system). However, 
 I suspect that the new one is not available unless you have installed WMP 7].
 
 @section What else can it do?
 
 You can replay video from .ffm files that was recorded earlier.
-However, there are a number of caveats which include the fact that the 
+However, there are a number of caveats, including the fact that the 
 ffserver parameters must match the original parameters used to record the
-file. If not, then ffserver deletes the file before recording into it.
+file. If they do not, then ffserver deletes the file before recording into it.
 (Now that I write this, it seems broken).
 
 You can fiddle with many of the codec choices and encoding parameters, and
@@ -134,12 +134,12 @@
 
 @section Tips
 
-* When you connect to a live stream, most players (WMP, RA etc) want to
+* When you connect to a live stream, most players (WMP, RA, etc) want to
 buffer a certain number of seconds of material so that they can display the
 signal continuously. However, ffserver (by default) starts sending data
 in realtime. This means that there is a pause of a few seconds while the
 buffering is being done by the player. The good news is that this can be
-cured by adding a '?buffer=5' to the end of the URL. This meanss that the
+cured by adding a '?buffer=5' to the end of the URL. This means that the
 stream should start 5 seconds in the past -- and so the first 5 seconds 
 of the stream are sent as fast as the network will allow. It will then
 slow down to real time. This noticeably improves the startup experience.
@@ -179,8 +179,8 @@
 @end example
 
 You can omit the YYYY-MM-DD, and then it refers to the current day. However 
-note that @samp{?date=16:00:00} refers to 4pm on the current day -- this may be
-in the future and so is unlikely to be useful.
+note that @samp{?date=16:00:00} refers to 16:00 on the current day -- this
+may be in the future and so is unlikely to be useful.
 
 You use this by adding the ?date= to the end of the URL for the stream.
 For example:   @samp{http://localhost:8080/test.asf?date=2002-07-26T23:05:00}.