[Ffmpeg-cvslog] CVS: ffmpeg/doc ffserver-doc.texi,1.5,1.6

[Diego Biurrun]

On Thu, Jun 09, 2005 at 07:07:33PM -0400, The Wanderer wrote:
> Diego Biurrun CVS wrote:
> 
> > Yes, it does. Any thoughts on this would be gratefully received. These
> > differences extend to embedding WMP into a web page. [There are two
> >-different object IDs that you can use, one of them -- the old one -- 
> >cannot
> >+different object IDs that you can use, the old one cannot
> > play very well, and the new one works well (both on the same system). 
> > However,
> > I suspect that the new one is not available unless you have installed WMP 
> > 7].
> 
> This still isn't right - there's still a run-on sentence, with two

Please remind me what a run-on sentence was, I always forget.

> separate sections. Since you've apparently rejected both of my suggested
> fixes, I leave it to you to come up with a solution, but the current
> form is not any better than the old. The problem is largely a matter of
> the commas.

I'm unhappy with all proposed solutions, including my own.  My last version
is less verbose, which I tend to favor in case of doubt.  This calls for
a complete rephrasing.

How about:

[There are two different object IDs that you can use. On the same system
the older one cannot play very well, while the new one does. However, I
suspect that the new one is not available unless you have installed WMP 7].

Diego